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May 21, 2016
biopsy by moondrums is a short yet strong poem that can be read multiple times to find multiple meanings.
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he works rhythmically
over the still girl on the table.

the surgeon’s incisions are steady,
practiced
as scalpel hews flesh from hip to hip

and near-tender, his hands and wrists
were it not for all the blood –

she wakes in fluorescence from
half-slumber
to the flutter of a phantom limb,
some precious unnamed thing
shorn from her
and discarded.

the amputation is final.
she often counts backwards
from ten, awaiting anesthesia
that does not come.
© 2016 - 2024 moondrums
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Pereyga's avatar
Interesting, first I thought it was about a dead girl until it turned to talk about amputation.